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A loud explosion ruptures through the air as a ship barreled forth onto PNF-404's lush surface. The ship looked to be of same age having a bunch of wear on it and seemed to have a tinted shade of blue... It SMASHED into the surface and an ejection seat flew off as PiK blasted out of it, along with his Pikmin Storm. He smacked right into a pellet posy and fell down with a satisfying plop and Storm floated right onto his lap. "Oh my gosh... did we actually just get out of there?" He stated. He looked around and seen his surroundings... He didn't know what to think of being alive from his horrid experience... He sighed and fell to his knees and said " It's over... I done it" PiK knew the enemy fighters might still be after him and hid in the brushes. After awhile he felt okay and came out and started to look for his ship. He gasped as he saw the sight of his beloved vessel destroyed and broken into pieces... The onion seemed to of been blown out of the haul.

He knew what happens at night and he knew that his ship would not be able to save him from the creatures of the night in the condition it is in right now... He knew he had to find help and fast! Suddenly two Hoctacians saw the fire and had run towards the smoke! One's name was Louie... quite odd fellow and another was Lynn. "I'll go and check out what that was! You stay here I don't want you to get hurt..." Lynn agreed and decided to stay. Louie had cut through the brush to see PiK examining his ship. Louie backed off to avoid confrontation. He came back to Lynn and said "It's a burning ship... I'm sorry there was no survivors" PiK luckily followed him and caught him off-guard surprising him yelling "I'm not dead yet!" in a angry tone. Louie fell to the ground surprised and Lynn giggled and greeted PiK. PiK told them of his situation and was offered a ride to Hocotate.

PiK had happily agreed and then blasted off to their home Hocotate. PiK was concerned being in a new environment knowing that his dictator is looking for him! After awile he became accustom to the strange planet. He became close to the Hoctacians and became an know resident there! PiK for the time being is staying with Lynn. Captain Olimar is Lynn's Uncle and live together in a house in the middle of what seems like no where... PiK for now is staying with them living outside for a little while and then moves in later. This is how it all got started...

((PiK: Look I know this wasn't the best! it's the beginning or in other word's the Prolouge... I don't remember much of this day because of how long it was ago... Also I tried to do it from all perspectives and write it in a story form. Don't worry the next one will be better and a lot more expressive~! This was just how I remembered it so don't get angry! XD))



(I didn't explain what the character's look like due to Illustrations of them)
TeamSonicForever4910 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
That's okay; why does this seem familiar, didn't you upload this before? Sorry, I'm just curious. 
PikminHensley Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014   Traditional Artist
Yes, I refined it and remade it in literature
TeamSonicForever4910 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
That makes sense now.
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